This is the script I used for my costume design video, which you can watch here. You’ll notice that the script doesn’t align with the video perfectly, because I use it more like a guide than something I have to follow to the letter. The script that I send you will probably look more like the example on the right than the one on the left:

Actual script

Bungou Stray Dogs has a lot of content, and it can get super confusing at times

that being said, it is my favourite story… like, probably ever

hi, I’m Moon, and I’m not gonna lie, after I hit ‘publish’ on my first BSD video, I kinda panicked

cause I just had no idea where to go next

when I stropped panicking and thought about it, though, I realised there is only one place to start that really makes sense

and that’s the same place I started when I posted this:

[atsushi vid]

that video is about 6 months old and sitting at 48 thousand views, and it kickstarted the series that so many of you love today

but I’ve had enough of 3-minute videos, so it’s time to take a deep dive

(in a perfectly safe contraption, of course. I’d never dream of sending you lot anywhere in an unstable vehicle)

Edited script

Bungou Stray Dogs has a lot of content, and it can get super confusing at times- but it’s like, my favourite story probably ever.

Hi, I’m Moon, and I’m not gonna lie! After I hit publish on that first video, I kinda panicked, because I had absolutely no idea where to go next. When I stopped panicking and thought about it, though, I realised that there’s only one place that really makes sense to start in— and that’s the same place I started when I posted this video:

[insert TikTok: “one of my favourite things about Bungou Stray Dogs that I don’t see a lot of people talking about is the costume design, and how intentional it is.”]

That video’s about six months old, sitting at 48 thousand views, and it kickstarted the series that you guys love so much. But I’ve had enough of 3-minute videos, so it’s time to take a deep dive (in a perfectly safe contraption, of course. I’d never dream of sending you lot anywhere in an unstable vehicle).

As always, please let me know if you have any questions! If you have a preference (e.g. you find it easier to follow along with a neater-looking script), please let me know at the end of the commission form. Here’s the full script for you:

Character Design in Bungou Stray Dogs: Coat Theory & Beyond

intro

Bungou Stray Dogs has a lot of content, and it can get super confusing at times

that being said, it is my favourite story… like, probably ever

hi, I’m Moon, and I’m not gonna lie, after I hit ‘publish’ on my first BSD video, I kinda panicked

cause I just had no idea where to go next

when I stropped panicking and thought about it, though, I realised there is only one place to start that really makes sense

and that’s the same place I started when I posted this:

[atsushi vid https://www.tiktok.com/@bluemoon.mp4/video/7221352099777400065?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc&web_id=7225403849179301378]

that video is about 6 months old and sitting at 48 thousand views, and it kickstarted the series that so many of you love today

but I’ve had enough of 3-minute videos, so it’s time to take a deep dive

(in a perfectly safe contraption, of course. I’d never dream of sending you lot anywhere in an unstable vehicle)

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